The After Dice

[Yammeryammeryammer]

Sorta reminds me of some old Saturday Night Live skits. Good stuff. And why would Despin say the final product wouldn't be as good?

[miker]

what's the hook? pls can you describe the concept in 25 words or less. I don't read unsolicited scripts ...

[emjen]

you can quote me on this too:

Kinda cool.

Its cool, kinda cool. You've inspired me. I can say that, I'll work on a 5 minute park-bench script soon enough.

Yes I like it. I dont really like it, but i am not not liking it either. Its decent. I also think 5 minute movies are very very hard to make, because you have to capture the audience, let them know the characters, let them know what is going on, let them know what kind of humour there is going on and all that. Hmm.

[Generic Skinhead]

Emjen: I'd rather quote you on this: "Yes I like it. I dont really like it, but i am not not liking it either."

Miker: Hook? Sod off. Here's the synopsis for ya:

John is a young business consultant who is clinically dead. The problem is he doesn?t know it. John has in fact entered a bizarre limbo while his life on Earth hangs in the balance. Everything looks normal enough, but the odd people he meets quickly exasperate John. One of these is the enigmatic Tal, who seems to hold the key to John?s predicament. Though Tal does answer some questions, it is Fate who will ultimately decide John?s destiny. She does this with a roll of the fabled ?after-dice?, with the numbers representing Heaven, **** or a return to Earth. How lucky will John be?

To anyone who took the time to read: thanks, and I'm glad most of you liked it.

As for what went wrong, well where do I start? [img]graemlins/cry.gif[/img]

I'll try to salvage it in October but none to likely it looks.

[blue eyed willow]

i like the after dice script and i am very hopeful of the recovery of the footage [img]smile.gif[/img]